Film Noir Film Pitch

In this lesson we pitched the film idea to the rest of the class, all the other groups also had to pitch their ideas to us.
For the pitch to be accurate we had to agree upon a name and a final narrative. We decided that an appropriate name for the film was 'A Dame with a Case'. We decided this fit well with our narrative, because it is the female character that goes to the detective about a murder. The pitch which we showed to the class is below:


After we completed the pitch we collected in all of our feedback and started to look through it together and this helped us to get a general idea as to what we needed to improve whilst planning and filming. 
Once we had a quick look through our feedback we had to then watch the other groups and give our personally feedback on theirs, so that they could also have others opinions.