For the pitch to be accurate we had to agree upon a name and a final narrative. We decided that an appropriate name for the film was 'A Dame with a Case'. We decided this fit well with our narrative, because it is the female character that goes to the detective about a murder. The pitch which we showed to the class is below:
After we completed the pitch we collected in all of our feedback and started to look through it together and this helped us to get a general idea as to what we needed to improve whilst planning and filming.
Once we had a quick look through our feedback we had to then watch the other groups and give our personally feedback on theirs, so that they could also have others opinions.