Film Pitch Feedback

After completing our film pitch we were given feedback from our class. We had to carefully look through all of this feedback and look at what we could do in order to help us improve the opening sequence. There were 6 main sections which we were given feed back on, these were:
1. What is the genre?
2. Who's the target audience?
3. Does it introduce the character and setting?
4. Does the mood and style fit?
5.  Is the narrative interesting?
6. What films is it similar to?

This was our feedback which we received:

Now when we plan and begin to actually shoot our film opening we will concentrate on all of the mentioned above an through doing this we will be able to make our film opening as realistic, professional and able to fit the genre as possible.